Flower

This is my latest tag.

I started with a simple c4d, and then started smudging.

No stocks only the c4d.

CnC.

I feel like something is missing, i just cant put my finger on it..

FINAL:

 

i like it
the only think i could say is about the little negative space...if you could "extend" a lil bit more the effect it would be great

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Its too bright, tone it down with some curves and it will be a beauty

 

he read my mind.

 

I don't like the scalelines on the left side. Try and make it more of a flower looking object. Other then that it's hotcakes.

 

Yup yup, exactly.

 

what they said, sick smudging though there, it doesn't feel rightfully centered.