It's to monotoned. And the face of your render doesnt match his body or the effects. The effects are nice but ditch the text. Your lighting is off. On his left side there should be no light if the lgith source is comming from the top right. Overall its decent.
So is like 60% of all the other work posted around here but I'll give ya that. ^_^ What do you want me to do? Replace it? I did place the lighting on the top right. :lol:
I wouldnt know what to replae i with maybe a cyrss head or something just the human face seems out of place. Fix the damn lighting lol its bothering me