Sprite Tag

i made this, how do you like it?

maybe a text would do good, but where d'you think i should put it?

cnc appreaciated

greez dray

 

i thinks its too blurry man, the sig needs something like more sharpened on the front maybe, to make a balance between the two sides

 

so the sharp focal is just too small eh?

hmm i'm atm making a sig of quite the same concept
maybe it's better

 

yeah men, plus the sprite should be the center of the sig, and it doesnt give that look

 

i know u were trying to achieve depth, and u did succeed, but i think the blur is a bit too overpowered
colors are meh, not very good for my taste
flow is good
gj on effects

good overall

 

Hmm okay, maybe I'll try it with a more simple sprite
i'll do less blur in the next one's

greez dray

 

Good tag, needs more flow to it though.
Sprite is oversharpened and the bg is over blurred so a nice balance between would be perfect