Scorpion

I think ive shoulded add more effects on the text what you think?

 

Not bad for a 3rd sig bro, keep makin' em and take a peak at some tuts. Great work.

 

Try looking at some tuts here
You'll surely get the hand of it

Nice try mate !!

 

Text in the bottom right corner seems out of place,I also don't really like the font you used for scorpion.
His Face looks oversharpened. Aside from that it's pretty neat,keep working.

 

well.. my advices would be to try not to oversharpen the render, you'll get an strange effect.
2nd try not to use multiple focals.. I made the same mistake in one of my LP.
and it's nice if its your 2nd sig , KIU

 

The Scorpion on the left looks too sharpened.

For the "Joey roductions" make the size of that smaller and change the anti aliasing to "None."

For the Scorpion on the right, it seems to take too much from the one on the left, so maybe a little blurring and fading into the background?