Looks to me like she's leaning over. Anyways. I like it, it's just not as good as what you usually make. It seems too sporadic.
Its "eh" to me I like the left side, not so much the right though. Well, not that I dont like it... something is missing though, I cant put my finger on it D:. Agreed though, I've seen much better from you not to be rude or anything D:
It's to blurry and it's just really bright. The right side seems pretty confusing lol. It just needs a little bit more work.