The New World

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  1. Renagade

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    not bad the planet looks a little weird tho.
    Maybe switch out the BG and do a space type scene and I think it would look sexy.
     
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    I don't have time tonight, but I'll try at a v2 tomorrow, if I have time then.

    It's not really supposed to be a planet, more of a warp-thing-a-majig. But I can see how no one else would think that. :P
     
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    yea do a space bg and it would look 10x better.
     
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    The concept is pretty cool, just think it needs to be taken further. And a space BG would be nice as Asar suggested
     
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    The background looks kind of creepy for that sort of a concept. The hand and the world fit in nicely but it seems to be missing something.

    Loving the concept but there is a lack of execution.

    Z
     
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    Alright I'm going to be gone all day, but I'll see what I can do later.

    The only reason it was the "creepy" background is because the person is wanted to getting away from it to get to the "New World". blah. I dunno.

    Thanks all. :]
     
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    Get rid of the text m8 and maybe fix up contrast/colour and it is sick
    Nice stuff Rena
     
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    looks ok. sharpen the focal more
     
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    sharpen the orb thing lol doesnt seem like planet to me lol, no land mass xP and no txt plz
     

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