Get Real,

Anyways Ive been long time away gfx'ing due to college and other stuff
anyways wanted to get some advices what to work on ,I just lost some of my touches ..

 

anyone.......

 

It looks really awesome man.
I like the 2nd and 3th ones the most.
But the text is hardly read-able on all of them.

 

V3 has flow, so lets work on it
Text can be improved, and contrast could be raised

 

v3 i like better than the rest, it has potential but could use some work.. text needs to be changed, i can't even read it..

Not bad though for your first in a long time, gj hun

 

V3 is better then the rest.
Work on flow

 

last is the best, its just too messy tho

 

I enjoy the 3rd one it flows and everything. The rest just have to much going on nice work.