A little too random for me hun to be perfectly honest, nothing seems to flow at all, random brushes all over it... Its not bad though if its one of your first, gj
I guess I see your point, but I don't think everything should have a flow. I appreciate the any comments though, it's what makes people better so.
Flow is a part of composition. One is necessary for the other. A piece without flow doesn't let the eye move naturally over the focals and makes the piece look disorganized, and the elements unblended. This is especially important in large pieces, because with only a small degree of focus, the eye has to move to see the piece. Clean up a few of the effects, and get rid of some of those hard edges and it might be a lot better.
Yeah, a focus is actually one of the most important things in a composition >< Your piece looks fine, but it really is rather jumbled.
