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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Loupu, Feb 28, 2009.

  1. Loupu

    Loupu Well-Known Member

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    c&c plx :D
    it's a simple sig....but i still want your opinion :D

    [​IMG] <----i think that less opacity at the text should be better

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    Fix the text, bad placement, bad font and bad colouring.. move it closer to the render its too distracting, the colour is too vibrant and the font looks pixilatd, depth needs work and the render could be blended better. add a light source too.

    Im getting harsher with crit since your getting better at this
     
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    i did get better?
    about the text...i put it there cause if i put it closer to the render the text will be unreadable
    about the font....i choose that cause of the flow....i wanted something handwritten/calligraphic...i wasnt sure about the font though...
    about the light source...yeah...i didnt think about it cause i had the smudge piece...i think its too bright
    ...damnnn...i need really more work i think :D

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    i agree with both of you and i like the sig gj
     
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    make your bg match your render a little makes the blending a lot easier. its pretty monotone looks like you added a photofilter ofblue or something and took all the color out of it.

    text is horrible to be honest.
     
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    yeah i know i suck at text :D....but tnx

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    I can see what you are trying to do with the text but the line doesn't really connect with the text. Keep up with the good work though :)
     
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    tnx :D..

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    When you put little thought into something it usually is simple. Thanks for being honest. :)
     
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    not feelin it bro, the text is not working for me
     
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    ok guys...i got it...it sucks :/....but i ll try to improve :D

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