I would re-do the entire thing if i was you. First of all, you can hardly see the text. The colors are bland, its almost entirely grey. There is no flow what soever, very random. if you really want to save this thing you should.. A: Make the width larger. B: give it color C: Give it flow D: make the legible Right now it looks like a bunch of random brushing and c4d to me, could be wrong.
yeah this doesn't look good at all to me... no flow.. random bits popping out (c4d i assume on the right) needs colours text needs work
Sorry mate do you know what your even talking about? I Feel you dont because the text there is clear as day. i dont have any problems seeing or reading it at all. It not all that bad mate, you still have the focal in the center. the effects are nice and no it isnt tooo monotone. Text need a bit of work and a more defined light source and more flow would really improve it
