Fading Beauty

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  1. Skoll

    Skoll Senior Member

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    messed around with bg a little to try to ceate a good flow and depth.

    CnC Away!
     
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    Not too bad, but a few things bother me here.. The BG has this weird look, as if it has been topazed or something. But that could just be me. Work on having more in your FG, the girl just kinda seems a bit pasted in, having stuff over her will better integrate the focal.
     
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    thanks for the CNC AP a wanted the bg kinda consuming her hence fading beauty so yes it is kinda the look of her behind it.

    and ya i get nervous about covering the render always feel it looks to much or weird.
     
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    why the hell do i always get **** for cnc.

    20 something views never any cnc -.-
     
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    Not feeling the background to be honest, it just seems a little random and it doesn't flow all too well with the actual render i feel. I could see what you were aiming for with the light source behind the render, but its a little much and could use some toning down, its just so bright. The hair could use a little more blending(right side), try a layer mask for that.
     
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    say no to brushing
     
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    i didnt use "brushing" =/
     
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    Too bright, colours are okay, but you should stop pasting your renders in the center... it means the composition is always off.
     
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    Doesnt flow imo..

    I think that with that render, the flow should be going this way: ////

    Agreed on having something over the render to help depth and blending..

    The lighting is insanely bright, so tone that down a bit xD
    I dont like the background either... It looks like a soft brush that was smudged using a hard brush with some scatter settings...
    then a topaz over it..
    Yeah. .. xD
     
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