c&c plx it's a simple sig....but i still want your opinion <----i think that less opacity at the text should be better ___________________________
Fix the text, bad placement, bad font and bad colouring.. move it closer to the render its too distracting, the colour is too vibrant and the font looks pixilatd, depth needs work and the render could be blended better. add a light source too. Im getting harsher with crit since your getting better at this
i did get better? about the text...i put it there cause if i put it closer to the render the text will be unreadable about the font....i choose that cause of the flow....i wanted something handwritten/calligraphic...i wasnt sure about the font though... about the light source...yeah...i didnt think about it cause i had the smudge piece...i think its too bright ...damnnn...i need really more work i think _______________________
make your bg match your render a little makes the blending a lot easier. its pretty monotone looks like you added a photofilter ofblue or something and took all the color out of it. text is horrible to be honest.
I can see what you are trying to do with the text but the line doesn't really connect with the text. Keep up with the good work though