in the earlier thread i got alot of comments about the text now i have removed the motion blur and added a clipping mask, smudge around the text and used the dodge tool abit heres the result v1 v2
as i said when you posted this version in the other thread, the top left corner is over burned, it doesnt look nice and the text could come closer to the render, dont be afraid of moving the text close to him. because its far away from him it distracts your eyes away from the focal, bring it so its around his lower back just above his belt but directly under his armpit. also the smudging on the first version is nicer than the second, keep the first but just fix the text
