Took a good amount of time to make very interesting looking I must say. i believe it kinda pulled me out of a little slump i've been having.
Too busy. It needs some negative space. Also, composition needs work. You should try be more creative with your text. It's always so average.
thanks for the feedback i usually don't add text because it comes out bad. I need some better fonts and examplesto use before i feel more comfortable with it i think.
