Wutelseshoulido

eh?

 

change the render, its distorted, setup some kind of color base, inner light, outer going darker but on a fade and add some fillers or some ----.. do some other ---- besides a c4d for a backround, think outside the box =]]]

 

I like the tone but the render looks distorted

 

it looks cool, just a lot of random blurring. And change the color of the whole tag, brownish color doesnt look right.

 

Better colours, looks really bland imo.

 

i like i thinks its perfect lol

 

Agreed, but maybe add some more light or just some random color effects.

 

Turn it to 500x120 or 100 might look better

 

Nvm my comments, i relooked at it, i understand it a lot better, it looks like hes hunting or somthing, i like it =D