First time working on a stock with more than one major focal it's a challenge. CNC? I Know its not amazing but i don't not like it.
As youve already stated about the focal just doesnt work with 4 spread out across the tag, at first i though it was a photo with some smudging at the bottom but now it just looks like a bg, stock and light smudging, not your best but i havnt tried a multiple focal sig so i dont know how mine will turn out ^_^
You can't have four focal points in a piece this size. Compositionally, it's not possible. The only time you can have more than one focal point is when you're creating flow, and even then the focals HAVE to be of varying strength, and on different planes of depth.