Take out the render and it would be a cool tag! The colors in render throw it off and the top right is low contrast.
It's too sharp, and lacks a focal. Would perhaps work better as an abstract piece, but even then it would lack enough effects and colours. The effects you have are pretty cool, and I would recommend you work on some new render blending techniques, and some better colouring techniques, so that your renders don't get lost in your work.
thanks for the feedback the bg is actually part of the render used its a aquaman render and he's jumping out of the water i was gonna get rid of the render but i felt it was missing something. I will work more on this.
