At first I thought I didn't like this but while taking a closer look it actually is quite neat I just hate the text.
I like the colorful idea you have just try and take away from the stock background it is getten in the way. Also don't make it so over taken by the lines.
At my 1st look I didn't saw the text but I observed it closer and I finally saw it .. Great tag man !! Like the colorful idea there ..
Not feeling this one man.... Its colorful, but its not very vibrant. The black areas don't seem to fit and I think it would look 10x better without them. Great concept though.
Did you do the lines with the Pencil tool? They're too sharp and don't look anti-aliased (which makes me think you used the pencil tool). Composition is terrible. Try working with canvas' about 400px by 150px. Try to avoid placing renders in the center, unless you know how to suitable balance the composition.
nah i cheated there c4d renders with a stroke and 0 fill on them, i was going for an idea that im not used to, i suppose i was new to it so i though it was quite neat, i realise now how crappy it is and how much work it needs before its anything close to a decent tag, thanks for the somments guys ill work on the next one sometime and take it into consideration
