Bahamut&noctis

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Btray_9UJ, Feb 22, 2009.

  1. Btray_9UJ

    Btray_9UJ Well-Known Member

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    So I've been bored now and started to work abit with PS to kill time.
    These are my outcomes :D

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    The second one isn't actually finished yet. But I just don't know what to do with it anymore. So I'd be very pleased if you got any tips on how to continue that one(or how to make backgrounds generally)

    CnC away :)
     
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    First one the colors don't flow with the signature and the render isnt blended to go with detail in the back and the text is just out of place.

    Second one needs some brighting up and some color and just more overall detail.
     
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    How's this one?
     
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    bump
     
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    1st one is not bad .. Just pick a color that match to the render :D
     
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    I'm troubled as to which exact color does not fit,from what you are saying it sounds like all colors don't match,please if you guys could take your time and get your paint out to mark the spots :P
     
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    worked on the other one as well now.

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    delete,accidentaly double posted.
     
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    I would say the red on the left wing is the part that's clashing. The orange up in the sky on the right is fine.
     
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    So I've been working once more.

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    Thanks for the input so far.
     
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    Your last post definitely looks much better, however it wouldn't be a bad idea to try removing the red entirely.
     
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    The red on his wings or in the remainder of the tag?
     
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    The top left corner, the brightish red in the background. The red/maroon on his wings is fine. *Reminder* these are all suggestions so don't make any permanent changes, or do anything you're not happy with ;D
     
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    Actually I do see some spots where I still might try to remove the red aside of the wings. I don't have time to do it now tough,so I might get to it tomorrow.
    It's just that I'm having alot of trouble removing any red from the sig since it's coming from the first 2 layers on luminosity so if I wanna change anything I actually have to redo the whole tag.
    ^ really gets to me :X
     
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    Bump caus I still want input on my FF XIII VS. One.
     

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