God Of War Sig

After a rather long sig break while ive been working with 3d applications i decided to make some sigs again because i just got my pen tablet. this is the first sig ive made in months.

 

Text is terrible but i love the smudge

 

agreem ditch or at least edit the text, the smudging is fantastic though, simple but very nice, good job bit of depth though and a mire defined light source and it would be 10/10

 

text needs help but good blend in the hands gives him power.

 

really nice smudging ...
you could do something better with the text though....add a clipping mask(it could be from the sig)...and it should look better

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Is that any better . if not give me a hint towards what i can do.

 

take out the wind thing on it, it doesnt fit the text, and just a nice simple font with the same colour scheme placed just under and left of his belt would work alright

 

I don't think the font works with the sig very well, IMO. Or the effect behind the text.

Edit: Looks like DRM and I posted at the same time...

 

Nice smudge, I like it

 

THx for all the nice comments btw.
i've made a clipping mask removed the motion blur and smudge abit around the text and then i have made the text stand out abit with dodge tool.

hope u like it