Resistance 2

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Shyboy, Feb 19, 2009.

  1. Shyboy

    Shyboy Well-Known Member

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    hi not sure about this one though im just trying different styles so C&C pls.

    THANX IN ADVANCE!.


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  2. eragon111

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    I like it but the C4D's dont flow as well as in your other signature ^_^
     
  3. Shyboy

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    its my own work but i still have to agree with that lol!
    like i said not my best work
    thanx for the comment!.
     
  4. CarrieMarie30

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    Well I like the lighting in this sig, it's very touching and solid. The only thing I can complain about here is the lack of a focal point. I don't know whether I should be looking at the alien thing or the guy...It gets confused in the translation. I go back though, I love the lighting and subtle background you've worked into this piece.
     
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    I did blur the left background to make the focal point stand out more was thinking about blurring the alien to
    dont know if that would look ok though
    any tips on how to make the focal point stand out more ?

    thanx for the comments!.
     
  6. kcmatt

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    I love the background and the lighting and also the colours but as people have said the focal point needs a bit of work :)
    It might be because you have two things that are at the front of the sig so they may detract attention from each other.
     
  7. CarrieMarie30

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    Well shy, at this point you have 3 focal points, you have the alien, the text, and the gentleman. I think if you really wanna capture the feel of this, go with a very definite focal, especially with an action type of picture. I'd go with the guy in the middle of the picture and make the alien attack fall into a soft blur background shot. You'll still keep in touch with your feel of the sig but you'll also make it fun to look at. The text should be part of it, but not stand out. Make it go with the render..
     
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    thanx for the fast comment back !
    i will post a v2 with the alien blurred working on it atm!.
     

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