UA you are a great artist but this piece is far from your best. It seems far too chaotic and the colors aren't very complimentary. Black/White and a random purple that really don't mesh well do not belong. I'm not sure if you grabbed that color from a C4D you were working with but it don't work. Not to mention the flow feels really sporadic. I find myself more focused on the lighting, and random effects that your initial focal... If you could do a quick blur on the background. Nothing overbearing but god purple isn't really catching the feel of this.
Neuron uses those c4ds all the time. I said Neuron because it reminded me so much of his stuff. Where did you get these c4ds? I want.
oooh lol um i dunno jsut some old effects i found from verious packs. they are nothing special jsut effects C4D's