Ichigo

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by LegeNdee, Feb 15, 2009.

  1. LegeNdee

    LegeNdee New Member

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    Tell me what you think.

    Updated version.

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  2. CarrieMarie30

    CarrieMarie30 Well-Known Member

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    Well thank you for sharing your art with us, and it's a great first post. There's a lot here that works, but there's a lot that don't. Let's tackle that good parts. First, and my impression is this, but it looks like a guy that is generally friendly, and seems to radiate a kindness, at least that's what he looks like to me. Hence the background and coloring. Now on the negative, there's too much of one color and it generally don't have much depth. Depth is when it looks more 3-D than 2-D, and looks like he's apart of the picture instead of a seperate entity. The flow could be fixed with the streaming C4D's heading Northwest with the way his head is turning and you could use a combination of colors here, like a more neutral base. this overall though is a great tag and feels very lively. It's great that you shared with us. It's got potential, but know this much, how do you feel about it? I think it'd be great for an artist to actually share his/her emotions about their creation instead of "Hey just made this, CNC plz"

    What was your inspiration? There's your challenge Mister arteeest!
     
  3. LegeNdee

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    I started working with CS2 about 2 months ago, and this is my best work by far, at least in my opinion. I was really feeling this sig the entire time I was making it, and I'm really pleased with the outcome. Thanks for the insight!
     
  4. Hoplite_A2

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    Not bad for 2 months. ;) You've got potential. ^^
    Keep doing tuts to get the feel for flow and stuff. It's kinda hard to just "feel" flow right off the bat.
    You need to see it, and practice it first. ;)

    Keep it up though!
    Good work
     

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