Destruction

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Eksale, Feb 9, 2009.

  1. Eksale

    Eksale New Member

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  2. Eksale

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    Bump, crits please? =/
     
  3. Btray_9UJ

    Btray_9UJ Well-Known Member

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    I personally don't like the way you made a cut in the"eksale" text,also i find it hard to find a focal point for this render,since u kinda blurred out the renders face.
    bottom right corner being completely black is also something i don't like.
    Sry about my critique being only negative,but i find it hard to form positive critiques on anything,don't take it personally.
     
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    Fix the text and tone down the blur on the render.
     
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    i kinda like the blur i think it blends it a bit
     
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    remove the fx over his face and it will be sweet
     

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