Your typography needs major work. It seems like you tried to imitate someone's style, but really, it didn't turn out well. Way too many spaces, vertically and horizontally between your words and letters. The under/overlines are week, and don't flow with it, and your font choice is...feeble. The 2nd two are better, I just don't think Beyonce stands out enough. Increase your focal with lighting and maybe add a bit more to it. You have some negative space that could use some filling to make your focal stand out much more.
Thanks and yeah I've been adding text to my recent stuff lately to try and get better at it. Not even sure if the tag is worth working on some more though, but if I do I'll add more to it then.
i like the deph around your focal alot and i'd really like to know where you get your c4d's from there always great. V2 is the best imo. I believe when it comes to a tag text is always one of the hardest things to get right.
I have many packs downloaded, I'm picky and really there's only like a few C4Ds out the 50+ I got that I use. And yeah text is very difficult Thanks and if you want some of the C4Ds I use I can just PM you the links of the packs.