First 3, In A While

I havnt had the time to use photoshop in a while and decided id give it a go this weekend, turns out i made 3 signatures

my newest:


and my 2 current ones
if you could c&c , would be appreciated, thanks

 

Not bad, text needs some work and you can blend the smudges or angled strokes or whatever that is a little.. there's alot going on, you gotta pick a focus of the work and try to add depth so that it really IS the focus on the work.

 

Work on the text.
I like the car one though
Good job.

 

thanks, i'll give another one a try and post it up a bit later

 

how does this look, i tried blending in the strokes more,and added contrast, lemme know what you think

 

Needs more of a light source

 

i thought so too a little, at the end i realized it got too dark,will be making a bit more, ill post em up here too
thanks