Transformers

Ok im not a fan of this style, i would rather stick to realism but i aint gonna learn anything if i dont brance out..

I know its crap but i would love some CnC to see how crap it is. Thanks





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I don't think it's all that bad, I think the text might look better if it was inlaid with a silver/metallic blue maybe to match the render.

 

I think it's almost fine, you went a little overboard with the lighting and I'm not crazy about the text.

 

Haha no sweat i got some new lightbeam brushes and i like them too much, i tried to keep with the transformers font but as for styling im not too hot on it, ill get a V2 done

 

to bright

 

Tone down the light and get rid of the clipping masked lines and i think it will be fine

 

I cant really see what is going on. As people already stated to much lighting maybe change the size the sig to flow better

 

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First one with no text is the best.

 

I like this tag.
Dont know why, it has good depth though.
Keep it up

 

put some flow in it