Another One Please Rate

Do you guys like this one?

I'm quite confident new tech. usw
developed by myself

 

Note bad, not bad at all. Looks good how it goes back in a string like effect and seems to spin around. As for the right side, not to sure if I like it as much.

 

Thanks a lot please more cnc guys

 

Bump please give more cnc

 

its alright just the quality seems fk'd up 4 some reason

 

yeah i agree with the above

it seems low quality , and at the right side of the render. You have some effects over the render
remove that so that we can see the full render , it seems cut off now

the effects itself are pretty cool, i like the colors .. text is ok
depth is good

i'd give it a 7/10 .. not bad, but could be better with some adjustments

 

Your welcome mate. That was one thing I forgot to mention. The right side of the render is going over it, it doesn't look so good. Try moving it, I would like to see a V2 for it

 

Thank you for the cnc

We'll see maybe i'll remove the text, or i'll replace it with another one

Greez

 

here is my updated version please cnc 2 changed gtext i made it more decent

 

There is something still with the quality - seems a little too distorted on the focal

 

i kinda don't understand .. maybe too much sharpeN?

i'll do my best !!

EDIT next try



is it getting worse somehow?

 

Bump

 

Better, i think its as good as you will get with this particular tag, next one please ^_^

 

kk we shall see thanks though!