Electric Rage

a new abstract tag from me:

 

its beautiful m8, but could you make another tendril going left? its a bit much dead space

 

There's empty space everywhere, try adding the same effect in different areas or do something else to the bg. The effects look nice though.

 

Great concept, but you didn't do much. You need to work harder then that to make it look rad.

 

Its okay, but not liking the fact that it'sa duplicate or that its too plain

 

too much white space

 

The concept is very nice. But the White space is annoying.

Maybe try doing the same type of lightening on the other side as well? just to fill up the background?

 

v2 added

 

V2 does look much better

Nicely Done.

 

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