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Crazy smudging. I can't really see what you were aiming for, but I like the looks of this. The smudging makes it look like smoke and the middle really catches my eye.

 

Yes, much better than Cold Snap.

Better color, great smudging, good focal. Plus it has some 'wow' to it.

8.3/10 - Very nice.

 

thanks ^_^

 

Better than the yellow one, but I'm still not really digging this style. Definately an improvement though. Maybe it's the monochromatic color scheme that's throwing me off.

 

I love it the tag is so smooth and immersive. Really great composition and the monochromatic color scheme suits it well. Don't you want to release it for LR? =P

 

added a new version

 

Now that I see the new version, maybe the monochromatic version is better after all. Interesting concept. I'd be interested in seeing different applications of this style.

 

I'd say try a diff color than brown brown is ugly

 

<3

 

I kinda like the new one. Cool creepy look to it.

My orginal rating still stands.

 

This is very interesting
Love the colors

 

I love your style! Its so damn <strike>Crazy</strike>... Origional, think i prefer the green version more, needs just touch more to it though i think

 

thanks guyysss. I love making these tags like this.

What do you mean by this?

 

tbh looks like naito's smudge, it is nice but i think it needs some more, maybe some circles or something, see some of naitos tags if you need some inspiration.