Joker

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  1. ricknl01

    ricknl01 Well-Known Member

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    Here's my latest project:

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    I'm pretty satisfied, but i still have the feeling its missing something, but i have pretty much run dry on ideas.. Any hints/tips on how to improve it are greatly appreciated.
     
  2. Ikuzo

    Ikuzo Well-Known Member

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    it has nice depth but the c4ds' don;t do anything for me, if anything their a distraction FROM the focal even though their on the focal..the light source is good but you need to work more on the colors and text.
     
  3. ricknl01

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    thanks for the comment, always nice to see someone take the time to give you some serious critisism

    any other opinions?
     
  4. iK3VRR

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    Great depth and i like the colors of him
    The text is ok but I like how the render was colorful and stands out
     
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    It's actually pretty nice. I dig it. Text is real bad, but that's pretty much the only negative I can see. Lighting on the joker's nice too, but I'd make it stronger some more, too. Keep at it.
     
  6. ricknl01

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    thanks for comments, will try to make the lighting a bit stronger later on
     

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