Version 1 Version 2 Alright now making a light source has never been my strong point so plz don't be harsh.. iv gathered allot of techniques over the years and seeing as this is a hobbie i think i have gotten better at it. But its like to get some criticism on it to see how i can improve!
Lose the text and the border, you also need to work on your depth much. It's not bad for a beginner definitely though man, you are on your way! If you need any help or anything just message me.