Soo this is a new i made the beginning was good but it was shid around the focus .. so i tried to make it better but it got worse and worse so well i think there is potential for making something out of this I'm not confident but i wasn't able to make it better though i want to know what you think of it
Since the tag became like that, I think it wouldn't be too much to classify it as an abstract tag. However, by classifying it as an abstract, it looks like you are trying to force a focal out of something abstract. Yet if we don't classify it as an abstract, it looks abstract. It really is a failed attempt. I think you should try redoing the tag all voer again.
