Sigh *added V2*

<div align="center"> I'm so disappointed at my self for this one....
especially the text
I'm stuck in a block but if you could give me some C&C it be nice anyways


I was thinking I should add a different background? anyone agree?

Version 2

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I don't really like it, sorry.
The background is plain so yeah, I think you should change it.

You should do something like your current sigs now.

 

not much flow.... at all....
it looks all random and not very effective at anything. sry not really diggin' it

 

I think you should take one render and work on that because now you have too much going on

 

looks chaosish and doesn't flow well. Too bad m8!

 

yea i no it sucks, i hated it from the start, but i wanted to try it anyways thanks guys

 

Well seems unfinished and not much effects to appeal to viewers. Just take a nice break if you're in a block

 

That^^
and
Would darken the back of his hood a bit more too and darken around him, too bright

 

thanks, lol thats the problem though i took a break, and i just can't get anything together that i like, so i started to try something a little simplier that i usually don't do, and i couldn't think of much, and it is a bit unfinished thats why I posted it so i could get some feed back from you guys, so thanks ima work on it tonight.

thanks <3

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added V2 thats better actually got in the zone and made a few repairs, i still need more though just wondering if i should keep going now or just dump it?

 

C&C please

 

i like the soft feel on both
keep it up mate

 

Maybe you can try making the focal stand out mroe?