Need Your Help

Well guys

i made this tag, which is not really finished

i want to get more focal rom outside to inside so it needs some textures going from outside inwards

d'you know what i mean?

maybe a c4d would help but that wouldn't fit i think

some suggestions would be nice

 

It looks pretty good so far.. try adding a c4d and making it a very low opacity

 

added a c4d and used an effect on it

gave the image more tummy ^^




still looks empty suggestions pls

original image
http://s208.photobucket.com/albums/bb213/c...-1164806629.jpg

 

urm bring her out more, lighting coming from behind her and outwards giving more power behind her,

making behind her the lightsource.

 

next version

changed quite a few things

 

get rid of the c4ds and add what i told you man, this time use shapes search on deviantart make sure they are for use though

 

well i'm trying, i add ebverything i know :

I'll do better ^^

 

got rid of the c4d and added some textures :s

d'you like it?

 

that is better but less sparkles on the focal, more around it imo

+ for future reference, help threads should be here : http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showforum=88

 

Kk ima make a news one

this one can't be helped anymore ^^

thanks

 

they seemed to get better the more you worked on it. i didnt like the one with the sparkles though, was kinda random.

 

Me agree.