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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by popcorn plya, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. popcorn plya

    popcorn plya Well-Known Member

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    Sorry if this is the wrong section

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  2. fufufishie

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    For some reason, I don't really like the brown spot in the middle. I like the grungy feel of it but I think that you can do more to it to have that feeling explode a little more. Overall, it feels incomplete to me.
     
  3. iK3VRR

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    Its good besides the tree area is blanked and dosn't have those white lines. It really stands out
     
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    I'll see what else I can do to it, thanks for your feedback.
     
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    i dont like the coffee stain, it might look better if it was massive and cropped.
    burn the edges?
     
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    If the stain was the Omen symbol from GOW2, it'd be win.
     
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    Maybe tearing around the edges, or maybe burning as mentioned above. The brown stain is a little unrealistic looking... it seems to pop-out strangely. Not sure what it is with that.

    Maybe more of a crease around the (fold area?) that line in the right-ish section of the picture.

    You asked for a rating?

    Banana out of space-time continuum. <---------- ratings are arbitrary.
     

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