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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Ryuuji, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. Ryuuji

    Ryuuji Senior Member

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    Text needs removing.
    Background doesn't look bad, if a bit, simple but the stock really doesn't blend in at all.
    You've got no light source, no shadow so there's no depth.

    Could be good but needs a few changes yet.
     
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    I see a little cop out light source. That little soft brush at the top doesn't count.

    Text looks meh.

    And, to me, it looks a tad boring. Nothing too eye catching.
     
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    I like the bg but the text I don't >.<, I have to agree the ninja dosen't blend in.
     
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    BG is ok, as said above the ninja does not blend in at all. Text is meh, and the flow is a bit weird :P. But the sig has potential :).
     
  6. Ryuuji

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    Heh, I know text doesn't look good, but it looked worse without it.
    and I guess I didn't put enough effort in the lighting, I'll remember that for my future tags.

    Thanks for the feedback, here I tried to improve lighting:

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    but I think I'll move on to something new instead than making more versions, and I'll try to keep all that stuff in mind
     
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    White blob just isn't lighting, needs...incorporating a bit more.

    And get our battle posted up. =p
     
  8. Ryuuji

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    lol done already :P
     
  9. Killah™

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    Text needs to go + render needs to blend alot more. Looks like it's just been put on. Other than that the BG is nice.
     
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    No depth, Background looks blank.
    Render doesn't blend and the text doesn't fit with the signature at all.
     
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    QFT. I would blend the render more and the ninja's lighting on him doesn't match the light source.
     
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    Change the text color + move the text

    But I like it
     

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