Don't like the random bars, or the random crown shape. Both need removing. As does the text. It's not bad otherwise, lighting's a bit off.
Hmm... the effects are kinda cool. But the tag overall looks really wierd to me. Like the render and the effects don't mix at all. Flow's off, the bars are a strange addition as well. Not diggin' the king stamp near his shoulder either. Hmm... But without a spartan in there it'd be pretty sweet.