Thejoker

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by cloudstrife_200, Dec 28, 2008.

  1. cloudstrife_200

    cloudstrife_200 Well-Known Member

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    So heres my first work in almost 2 years, C&C NEEDED i know i need improvement so point me in the right direction :)

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    V2: [​IMG]
     
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    Okay.. considering its been two years.. thats pretty amazing to me

    The text should probly be blended a little more and maybe a different color
    but its kind of blurred on the left side, then sharp on the right side.. I like that because it looks like you changed it behind the joker
     
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    yeah i realized the text is kinda second rate, i just kind of slapped it on there, couldn't think of anything to do with it lol ill go read some tuts on text to improve me in that area, and i may change that left side as suggested. thank you for the input :)
     
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    no problem..lol good luck with that and post some more after that

    (i always suck at text 2)
     
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    V2: [​IMG]

    i tried to blend the text in more, didnt bother changing the color, and i tried to point the focus more in the middle versus the right side, so i changed the lighting, tell me what you think
     
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    o yea... It looks a lot better when you took out all that color

    And yup the text is lookin much better :)
     
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    ha thanks man your input helped me alot :)
     
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    yea.. I am really diggin that haha

    You should make your sig, for now at least
     
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    bump for more comments please
     
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    i like v2

    try to add depth to your sigs, cuz this one is pretty flat.

    and the background could be a little less colorful and bright, it distracts from the render, because its just really messy and bright. make sure your render/stock picture is the focal point, the main thing we see
     

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