i like how you are trying to get the smudge effect GOOD JOB ON THT , but it can use some effects like c4d or better yet more smudging with twist added to it.
The focal should be a little more to the right. You have way too much empty space by leaving her there. Sprite could use a bit of contrast, but overall I like what you have so far. Perhaps you could also sharpen some parts of the smudging.
thanks, i kinda like the empty space myself, so i leave it with that but i can try adding some effects into it added v2 and v3
