I wouldn't exactly say amazing. Smudging is okay, depth is to be desired. It looks quite monotonous, and I dislike the text.
lol thnaks i am still working on my coloring im trying to work out getting the focal point pointed out hows
Instead of just changing the hue add some new colors. Grab a bid soft round brush, grab a vibrant color, brush a little bit, set to screen, erase what looks bad, and repeat.
I feel if you remove her, move your focal to the center a little bit more and work on the coloring it will be tons better since the smudge is nice work.
uh well i think you need to expand on ur colours haha seems to be just brown and black. good depth, but the quality of the stock is poor. text could be improved aswell