Race Driver Grid

First proper Sig Ive actually sat down and though about when making rather than just going with the flow of things.

R & C please..

V1

V2

V2 Skyline

 

Dude thats hawt

 

im sorry i don't really like it

 

thanks typhoon.
omigo is there anything specific you dont like about it that i could improve on or just the general style?

 

i dont like the horizontal line. text aint great either. IT might look better with lil bit coloring but the effects arent bad at all, well done

 

Maybe put the line which goes from left to right a little bit lower. And some more attention on the text part. Remove the DRM part on the hood, work the idea of the text at the right. There is some flow in it. Maybe do also something with the colors, little plain imo.

 

Thanks guys will look into it and get v2 up soon.

 

Very nice, but the line through it kind of kills it. Good luck on v2.

 

V2

 

how did you do the line?

Version 2 is much better i think

 

Rectangular marquee the full length of the piece, duplicated it and slightly overlapped them both then erased what i didnt want.

And Thank you, i played around with putting a city skyline in the background too but im not sure, i throw it up and see if anyone agrees

 

put little c4d and fix the text a little and i don't like the horizontal line

 

I like it very much. Nice effects. Text isn't too terrible. I like the flow you added with the pen tools.

 

Without sounding ignorant or stupid or anything, Ive seen this c4d term come up a few times in other threads, could you please explain to me what this means? I only started using photoshop a couple of weeks ago when a friend lent me the disk so i don't really know a lot of the terminology or the abbreviated terms. Thanks

And how does the new version sit with you mate?

 

what do u have cs2,cs3,cs4