Would You Kindly?

v2



v1 no text




v2 no text



i've been telling myself for the better part of a year that i was going to use this render in a sig, and they all turned out ----, so i stopped.
im feeling better about this one.

i'd appreciate CnC if you have any

 

I like it a a lot, nothing much i can see wrong with it at all.. only thing im not fussed about is the blurring on the left side of the page where the glove starts to blur into the dark, i think its blurred a tad too much but im no critic really im still working my way through tuts and the like.

Very nice Work

 

Nice lighting.

 

Agreed. Very nice lighting. I think it was a great render. I don't really like the font or the placement, but i like what it actually says.

 

Very nice tag. Not much i don't like about. But the blurring on the left and the low quality of part of the hand lets it down. Great lighting. Everything else is nice.

 

Very good lighting, but I think there could be just a very slight bit more on the bigger hand. Other than that, great work.

 

thanks for all the comments, heres v2

 

v2 is much better.

 

yeah i like v2 more
text is not as out of place

 

thanks for commenting

 

Defiantly v2, really like it and on the hand, cant see what you've changed but it appeals to me more. 10/10

 

i eased up the smudging on the hand and made it brighter and also changed the text (duh)

 

Hehe yea i noticed the txt, but i couldnt quite place what it was you did to the hand but now that you mention it i can see it now. Very nice work

 

i like them both but v2 is better

 

Get rid of the typo it ruins it, get rid of the text. There's a little inconstancy in the depth(like blurring the large hand). Other than that its nice.