Another New One

Still getting used to this stuff again. I kind of like this one though.

Edit: New version. More effects, better contrast, a few touch ups, and text.

 

wow i like the flow of this, but theres way to much negative space imo,
maybe have a bit of a texture or somethign in the background, just a little blank for me.
good work though

 

Not bad, I like it, but you could add a bit more to fill the entire sig.

 

well taking what WWII said I actually think taking a little out of the bg and to make the focus of the render and surrounding effect just stand out alone would make it even better ^_^

 

I like it and don't see any major probs.....good job!

 

Thanks guys, comments helped me create a new version, which I'll add to my initial post in a second.

 

Love the new one. Although the text under halo is quite small.

 

I like it m8 Text looks good too