Playin Mi Gitarr

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by kevinizpro, Dec 20, 2008.

  1. kevinizpro

    kevinizpro Active Member

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    Cnc please?
    im kinda sttuck

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  2. Proximity-HazeD

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    Its something about the render, I think the effects cover to much of the bottom of him as well.

    Try editing the render using some colors burns and curves to make it pop out more maybe? idk something about the render bugs me I just don't no what
    also i think you should figure out a background for it, maybe use a space stock? make a spacish look to it, i think it would fit lol.
    just put something else in the background. I think its the fact that the rest of the signature feels so empty.
     
  3. kevinizpro

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    alright
    thanks for the tips bro
     
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    Yeah, the focal is too hidden/blended. I didn't see anyone playing the guitar at first...
     
  5. kevinizpro

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    newest versionn
    this any better focal wise?
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    i like the latest version :-)
    not so keen on all the whiteness in the background, but meh thats just me.
    keep it up :-)
     
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    Yes it is, but I still think you have him to hidden.
    also you still really need to add something else to the background man, i think it'd help the effects sooo much


    PS: ( I didn't mean remove the effects i just meant maybe move them away a little, and add some more that didn't cover him so much )
     
  8. 03jatkin

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    im with prox,
    the background needs something.
     
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    Try a black background. Nice effects.
     
  10. kevinizpro

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    i would try the black, but i have efx, that the white is hiding, like effect c4ds and such,

    as for the empty space, ill try to fill it up in a bitt.
    the focal is pretty much on the top, with no efc covering it, except for his foot. ill try and play around with it too...

    thanks for the cnc guys


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    Tryed adding something in the bg.
    Also just went with border.
    Better??

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