V I P E R

well, this is something I'd really appreciate CnC on ^^
making it was really fun btw.

 

cool concept. did you make the rips in the page as well?

 

thx, and yeah.
I also made the page btw

 

thats great. i actually realized that you wrote the page cuz i saw Viper ryuuji in the middle lol nice touch

 

nice concept and execution looks nice imo

 

It looks very cool, but the viper seems flat and the drop shadow is in the wrong direction.

 

thanks for the comments everyone.
...and yeah, i just noticed the drop shadow :/

 

I agree with Neuron, when i look at it the viper doesn't really fit in still, I do like the concept as well.
but I also don't like the left side tear as much as the right side.

the right looks more like a tear, the left is kinda... idk you can still tell its a tear, just i think you could make it look better you know?

and heres an idea I just thought of for your tag!!
maybe on the left were its all white make it look like theres more pages like its a book?
and maybe add some more wear to the page as well? ( or book if you like the idea )

Just suggestions !!!

I love it though ryuuji great job