Decided to change my sotw entry.. Ran across an image that inspired me, and yes 100% pentool even the japanese symbol xD Image used as guideline
Except I agree with him. And I have better taste then you. Sorry pink, it could be good it just needs...something. The text for starters needs to go, I'd find a Japanese font and maybe put it just to the right of her, at an angle. Think you can develop it further while keeping the whole "simplistic" style going on, don't have to over-do it. Good start though. ^^