Is the lighting on the face not coming from opposite directions? I'm not sure what it is, but something about that head is putting me off. Maybe it is the grime, maybe it's the light, but I don't fancy that head. The text could use some work, but as I am a n00b I can't give you any suggestions. Other than that I am loving it.
You have a very distinguished style. I like it. Not loving the text, but it doesn't take away from the focal so its fine. And as Light said, the lightings all funky. Other than that it's all good.
well i couldn't really do much with the light on the bottom of the face its just there i don't even understand it in the stock we were given. and yea i'm workin on the text now anyways lol thanks for the comment
wow, you are fast and good job with the lighting. It looks normal now The text looks better and the curly red line is a nice touch; the text is still a little plain though, but maybe less is more, I dunno.
Yeah the light is tough because he has some kind of LED in his chest plate shining on his face, but you've still pulled this off well. I like the effects and even fancy the text, but I think maybe you could do with a little less clutter to his left (our right).
yea see the problem I discovered with that though ngs was that theres guys behind there and with the effect covering them it didn't look to good so i blurred it out to add depth.
