Chillin

Well, i decided to step out of the box and try something new...this is a first for me using the pentool so please be gentle with the C&C...

opinions?

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nice idea with the pentooling but it doesnt fit. too blurry and thick? try a thinner line

 

Thanks Drahgon!!

 

left side is too blurred the concept is nice but u still need to work on it

 

thanks Nilogic....pretty new concept for me on this one...i will do more to get better, thanks again!!

 

monotone and the composition/depth is screwed up

but yes concept is nice

 

if you remove that pentooling and add some nice lightning itl be great

 

thanks for the feedback!