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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Proximity-HazeD, Dec 5, 2008.

  1. Proximity-HazeD

    Proximity-HazeD Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">Been a while since I've been on GR or since I've done sigs lol so help me out with some C&C thanks!!!!

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    I find it real cool what you have done with the colors here love the smudges
    Other than that I feel I have to be somewhat harsh. I don't really like the text (I suck at text so I usually leave it out hah! :D)
    I see a light source in the upper right corner but I really don't see it doing anything. It seems to be a big white blob.
    Other than that I feel that this could be the start of a nice tag though but you need to add a stock and some effects
     
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    Yea I usually like adding text, but I wasn't to sure on this one kuz I was having a hard time placing it on this tag wasn't easy, and originally i did start with a render but I didn't like the way it went with it so I took it out. Thanks 4 the C&C though rath :D but I'ma take out the text and put a filler in for the lighting source so its not there anymore.
     
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    thats is just f*cking awesome sig
     
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    Thanks Nilogic :D
     
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    Hey.

    I think it's pretty, but loses interest quickly. I didn't notice the text my first glance, maybe try something more with that to keep the eye on the piece. The blue and orange work great together, I'm not sure if you know color theory or not, but those two are complimentary of each other. That said, the deep green which is probably a result of those two mixing should be worked out, if you ask me. I don't like it in there, probably fine ...and just my preference.

    My last comment would be the texture. The signature looks grungy, which is fine, but grunge is known for it's flat look. I'm saying it's not very deep, but it's hard to change because abstracts are usually worked from the ground up, and aren't easily remedied.
     
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    Well thank you for that great critique very helpful.
    the text, I'm about to just get rid of cause I still can't figure out a place for it.
    I'm glad you pointed all of that out and I'm going to try working on it.
    But it was a signature to kinda refresh myself. But I was wondering what was missing! :D
    So once again thanks coke :D
     
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    lacks depth and coloring is off
    has no real focal point seems empty
     

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